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 That may not sound like much, but keep in mind that the first volume starts with her just deciding on-the-fly to chase after some kidnappers in a plane she ‘borrowed’, which leads her to end up trespassing in the territory of the country they're technically at war with. How the situation doesn't end up worse is incredible.\\
 There's plenty of story that can be gotten out of her is my point.
+Also, to elaborate on //neat stuff// a bit more: I don't just mean the characters (like Allison), but also some concepts and story beats. The second volume features a Kingdom without a royal family, because they were all executed (thought it was covered up as an accident iirc).\\
+I am //convinced// that the worldbuilding and cliched theme are what's holding it back.
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   * [[https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Allison|Allison – Baka-Tsuki]]