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 The reason this isn't that big of a problem is that the series is only 4 volumes total, so it just //barely// overstays its welcome.
-Besides that though? Yeah, it's alright. I think the worldbuilding actually //kinda// works if we take the intended theme (which is [[lb:Japanese Kumbaya]]-related) into account...as it kinda makes sense. The issue is that past the first volume, there are serious issues with the worldbuilding keeping everything in order...because, while it makes sense in that initial volume's premise...it //doesn't// make sense longer-term.\\
+Besides that though? Yeah, it's alright. I think the worldbuilding actually //kinda// works if we take the intended theme (which is [[lb:Japanese Kumbaya]]-related) into account...as it kinda makes sense.((:fn:>Though while watching the anime, I noticed an EVEN BIGGER issue with the worldbuilding: the <wrap spoiler>mural</wrap>.\\ <wrap spoiler>The mural cannot exist because, presuming it's from the Stone Age, there is no way in Hell that the two symbols (of the two continents) could have survived into the modern day. It just isn't possible.</wrap>)) The issue is that past the first volume, there are serious issues with the worldbuilding keeping everything in order...because, while it makes sense in that initial volume's premise...it //doesn't// make sense longer-term.\\
 My personal approach would have been to treat the first volume as a one-off/pilot/preview like you sometimes see with manga. Then I would have taken the time to work on the worldbuilding a bit more...and then I would have continued.\\
 But that's why I said it just //barely// overstays its welcome.