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 ====== Allison ======
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-**アリソン**(Allison) is a [[lb:Light Novels|light novel]] about two teenagers in a world with two continents split right down the middle that are eternally at war until the end of the first light novel.
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+**<span denote :ja>アリソン</span>**(Allison) is a [[lb:Light Novels|light novel]] about two teenagers in a world with two continents split right down the middle that are eternally at war until the end of the first light novel.
 ===== Reviews =====
 ==== Allison ====
-My biggest gripe with <cite>Allison</cite> is that it comes off as quite naïve, going all-in on the [[lb:japanese kumbaya]] cliché. This is fine...//at first//...at the end of the //first volume//...but gets more grating with each installment.\\
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+<div star>★</div>
+<div star>★</div>
+<div star>★</div>
+<div star disabled>★</div>
+<div star disabled>★</div>
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+My biggest gripe with <cite>Allison</cite> is that it comes off as quite naïve, going all-in on the [[lb:japanese kumbaya]] cliché. This is fine...//at first//...at the end of the //first volume//...but gets more grating with each installment.
 The reason this isn't that big of a problem is that the series is only 4 volumes total, so it just //barely// overstays its welcome.
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+Besides that though? Yeah, it's alright. I think the world-building actually //kinda// works if we take the intended theme (which is [[lb:Japanese Kumbaya]]-related) into account...as it kinda makes sense.((:fn:>Though while watching the anime, I noticed an EVEN BIGGER issue with the world-building: the <mark spoiler>mural</mark>.
+<mark spoiler>The mural cannot exist because, presuming it's from the Stone Age, there is no way in Hell that the two symbols (of the two continents) could have survived into the modern day. It just isn't possible.</mark>)) The issue is that past the first volume, there are serious issues with the world-building keeping everything in order...because, while it makes sense in that initial volume's premise...it //doesn't// make sense longer-term.
+My personal approach would have been to treat the first volume as a one-off/pilot/preview like you sometimes see with [[lb:manga]]. Then I would have taken the time to work on the world-building a bit more...and then I would have continued.
-Besides that though? Yeah, it's alright. I think the world-building actually //kinda// works if we take the intended theme (which is [[lb:Japanese Kumbaya]]-related) into account...as it kinda makes sense.((:fn:>Though while watching the anime, I noticed an EVEN BIGGER issue with the world-building: the <wrap spoiler>mural</wrap>.\\ <wrap spoiler>The mural cannot exist because, presuming it's from the Stone Age, there is no way in Hell that the two symbols (of the two continents) could have survived into the modern day. It just isn't possible.</wrap>)) The issue is that past the first volume, there are serious issues with the world-building keeping everything in order...because, while it makes sense in that initial volume's premise...it //doesn't// make sense longer-term.\\
-My personal approach would have been to treat the first volume as a one-off/pilot/preview like you sometimes see with [[lb:manga]]. Then I would have taken the time to work on the world-building a bit more...and then I would have continued.\\
 But that's why I said it just //barely// overstays its welcome.
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+I realized only now that I kinda failed to elaborate on what the problem with the world-building is...so uh...I'll elaborate with more details in the future, but the gist of it is that the world of <cite>Allison</cite> features one Pangaea-style continent which is split exactly in half. After millennia passed, the people of the two continents mutually discovered each-other and then, seemingly, realized that it makes more sense to hate the guy across the street than the next-door neighbor.
+Each continent united into mega-alliances (the West into an autocratic Empire, the East into a democratic Federation) which then occasionally went to war with each-other: the aim being to exterminate the other side. Both continents frequently bicker about everything...including //which continent// humanity originated from.
+The first volume ends with <mark spoiler><dfn [data-type=character]>Allison</dfn> and <span smcp [data-type=character]>her boyfriend whose name I suddenly forgot</span> discovering an ancient cave painting that evilmen aim to destroy. This cave painting depicts the sacred symbols of each continent side-by-side showing that, in the past, both peoples were united as one. This then leads to both sides realizing that fighting each-other is pointless and dumb and they should stop – which they do</mark>.
-I realized only now that I kinda failed to elaborate on what the problem with the world-building is...so uh...I'll elaborate with more details in the future, but the gist of it is that the world of <cite>Allison</cite> features one Pangaea-style continent which is split exactly in half. After millennia passed, the people of the two continents mutually discovered each-other and then, seemingly, realized that it makes more sense to hate the guy across the street than the next-door neighbor.\\
-Each continent united into mega-alliances (the West into an autocratic Empire, the East into a democratic Federation) which then occasionally went to war with each-other: the aim being to exterminate the other side. Both continents frequently bicker about everything...including //which continent// humanity originated from.\\
-The first volume ends with <wrap spoiler><dfn smcp>Allison</dfn> and <span smcp [data-type=character]>her boyfriend whose name I suddenly forgot</span> discovering an ancient cave painting that evilmen aim to destroy. This cave painting depicts the sacred symbols of each continent side-by-side showing that, in the past, both peoples were united as one. This then leads to both sides realizing that fighting each-other is pointless and dumb and they should stop – which they do</wrap>.\\
 There are a lot of issues with that, but I'm gonna leave it there for now.
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 ==== Lillia & Treize ====
 I would write something here, but I either stopped reading during the first volume or after finishing the first volume. I wasn't really as into it as I was into <cite>Allison</cite>. Again, the world-building cannot possibly maintain a story past the first volume of <cite>Allison</cite>.
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 I decided to watch the first episode today (<time>2025-08-28</time>) and my first impressions (not having finished the episode) are...lukewarm.
-I'm not impressed with the voice actor for <span [data-type=character]>Wil</span>. I also think the tone of the series is completely off from what I would have expected it to be. So far, it's a lot more //chill// than the story came off in the light novel – despite it being very faithful to the source material.\\
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+I'm not impressed with the voice actor for <span [data-type=character]>Wil</span>. I also think the tone of the series is completely off from what I would have expected it to be. So far, it's a lot more //chill// than the story came off in the light novel – despite it being very faithful to the source material.
 What I'm interested in is what'll happen when the more action/tense stuff comes up. Though who knows if I'll get that far.
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+Having just finished it...yeah, there was **a** //tense// moment (or at least an attempt at one), alongside a chase scene. But this is a //chill// series first and //action/adventure// series second. This is actually **not great** believe it or not, since the story-lines are more action-heavy than slice-of-life.
-Having just finished it...yeah, there was **a** //tense// moment (or at least an attempt at one), alongside a chase scene. But this is a //chill// series first and //action/adventure// series second. This is actually **not great** believe it or not, since the story-lines are more action-heavy than slice-of-life.\\
 I'm not sure exactly what compelled them to do this. Maybe this has to do with <cite>Kino no Tabi</cite>? Because the author of that also wrote this...and the anime for <cite>Kino</cite> pre-dates <cite>Allison & Lillia</cite>. If they asked him for his input – well, bad idea in the first place – and he said it should be like this...that could also explain it?
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 I'm going to stick with the series, though I'm not particularly impressed.
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 ===== Speculah & Analysis =====
 ==== More Allison! ====
-The thing is, despite what I said above: I actually think there's a lot of neat stuff in the series, just that it's held back quite severely by its own world-building and the plots it went for.\\
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+The thing is, despite what I said above: I actually think there's a lot of neat stuff in the series, just that it's held back quite severely by its own world-building and the plots it went for.
 Everything revolves around the Japanese Kumbaya theme, which gets tiring fast (hence why I didn't like <cite>Lillia & Treize</cite> that much).
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-But, hear me out: **__<span smcp [data-type=character]>Allison</span>__**.
+But, hear me out: <em underline highlight>**<span smcp [data-type=character]>Allison</span>**</em>.
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+I find <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span> to be an interesting character on her own. I'll note that I'm singling her out because the series //is// named after her but this generally applies to many of the other characters too (though not **<span [data-type=character]>Wil</span>** who is kinda boring).
-I find <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span> to be an interesting character on her own. I'll note that I'm singling her out because the series //is// named after her but this generally applies to many of the other characters too (though not **<span [data-type=character]>Wil</span>** who is kinda boring).\\
 I'll also note, explicitly, that this is //my opinion//. <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span> is a good character, but I //personally// find her interesting.
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+Anyway...I think that <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span> (the character) would benefit from //existing// in other stories. Either as a main character or a character alongside someone else (<span [data-type=character]>Wil</span> if we're desperate). There is plenty about her that is pretty cool: she's a pilot in the military; she's an orphan; she's a [[lb:genki girl]] who is //**hot**//; she tends to be pretty reckless and doesn't consider consequences.
+That may not sound like much, but keep in mind that the first volume starts with her just deciding on-the-fly to chase after some kidnappers in a plane she ‘borrowed’, which leads her to end up trespassing in the territory of the country they're technically at war with. How the situation doesn't end up worse is incredible.
-Anyway...I think that <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span> (the character) would benefit from //existing// in other stories. Either as a main character or a character alongside someone else (<span [data-type=character]>Wil</span> if we're desperate). There is plenty about her that is pretty cool: she's a pilot in the military; she's an orphan; she's a [[lb:genki girl]] who is //**hot**//; she tends to be pretty reckless and doesn't consider consequences.\\
-That may not sound like much, but keep in mind that the first volume starts with her just deciding on-the-fly to chase after some kidnappers in a plane she ‘borrowed’, which leads her to end up trespassing in the territory of the country they're technically at war with. How the situation doesn't end up worse is incredible.\\
 There's plenty of story that can be gotten out of her is my point.
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+Also, to elaborate on //neat stuff// a bit more: I don't just mean the characters (like <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span>), but also some concepts and story beats. The second volume features a kingdom without a royal family, because they were all executed (though it was covered up as an accident IIRC).
-Also, to elaborate on //neat stuff// a bit more: I don't just mean the characters (like <span [data-type=character]>Allison</span>), but also some concepts and story beats. The second volume features a kingdom without a royal family, because they were all executed (though it was covered up as an accident IIRC).\\
 I am //convinced// that the world-building and cliched theme are what's holding it back.
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 ===== Trivilinks =====
   * [[https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Allison|Allison – Baka-Tsuki]]