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 ====== Death Note ======
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-**デスノート**(Death Note) is a Japanese media franchise based on a [[lb:manga|manga]] which focuses on a random highschool student, named <dfn>Light Yagami</dfn>, who finds a <dfn>Shinigami</dfn>’s notebook, which allows him to kill anyone provided he follows the rules.((:fn:>Which can be conveniently ignored at certain points in the story.))
+<dfn :ja>デスノート</dfn>(Death Note) is a Japanese media franchise based on a [[lb:manga|manga]] which focuses on a random highschool student, named [[lb:dn:light|Light Yagami]], who finds a [[lb:dn:Shinigami]]’s notebook, which allows him to kill anyone provided he follows the rules.((:fn:>Which can be conveniently ignored at certain points in the story.))
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-<cite>Death Note</cite> is an interesting franchise because the initial story has some pretty incredible elements that are evened out by some of the dumbest things I've ever seen in a story.
+<cite>Death Note</cite> is an interesting franchise because the initial story has some pretty **incredible** elements that are evened out by some of the **dumbest** things I've ever seen in a story.
 So, yeah, I'm not gonna be popular.
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 ===== Reviews =====
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 While I don't have experience myself, my friend's girlfriend (yes, really) has read another work by the same author and said it isn't good. I'm noting that just because it's relevant to ‘good by accident’ but, well, this is obviously not conclusive evidence.
 ==== The Broken Sequence that fixes Death Note ====
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 **Note that spoilers here are unmarked, be warned!**
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