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lb:this.therefore.that [2025-05-27 11:30:21] – ↷ Page moved from playground:this.therefore.that to lb:this.therefore.that ninjasrlb:this.therefore.that [2025-09-28 09:26:06] (current) ninjasr
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 This is a reframing of setup/payoff which can be more useful in a specific scenario.\\ This is a reframing of setup/payoff which can be more useful in a specific scenario.\\
 This idea mostly comes from [[https://speakola.com/arts/matt-stone-trey-parker-nyu-writing-class-2014|here]], though I'm going to summarize it. This idea mostly comes from [[https://speakola.com/arts/matt-stone-trey-parker-nyu-writing-class-2014|here]], though I'm going to summarize it.
 +{{tag>story_theory}}
 ===== Elaboration ===== ===== Elaboration =====
-Basically, when you're recounting your own story structure, you should avoid having the word ‘and’ occur between events: Jack fell and Martha was sad’ and, instead, you should have the word therefore: Jack fell therefore Martha was sad.\\+Basically, when you're recounting your own story structure, you should avoid having the word ‘and’ occur between events: <q>Jack fell and Martha was sad”</q> and, instead, you should have the word therefore: <q>Jack fell therefore Martha was sad”</q>.\\
 This is why I say it's just a reframing of setup/payoff and more of a tool than its own thing. However, it's very useful for getting a feel for setup/payoff...or cause/effect if you prefer. It's also useful when nesting structures. This is why I say it's just a reframing of setup/payoff and more of a tool than its own thing. However, it's very useful for getting a feel for setup/payoff...or cause/effect if you prefer. It's also useful when nesting structures.
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